Today we're looking to Colin May's rather untraditional look for the Columbus Blue Jackets. I kind of like the sash-style striping, but I wouldn't cut it off there, I'd go all the way over the top and around the back.
Colin took a stab at some revisions. He also tells me he's working on an All-Star version as suggested in the comments.
And here's that All-Star version I mentioned.